Feedback from the pitch

Feedback from the pitch

Me and my team have finished the pitch and have received a merit overall. The pitch went very successful and we overall added all of the information that the client needed. The main areas we hit at were outlining the making of the film and the production going into making the film altogether. Another was planning everything as whole. We have planned everything quite well with each date being as accurate to date, but we did have some criticism, which we always expect and try and improve for the future.

One of the criticisms was describing the film itself. We spent so much time describing the films making aspects that we didn’t include information about what will be in the film, from what we will be showing to what the tone of the film will be. In the presentation, we thought that wouldn’t be as important to add in as the rest of the content, but we really should of added it anyway, it is obviously very important to.

Another thing which we didn’t add which we knew we had was the schedule. This was a clear mistake which we had done because we did have the schedule ready to hand, but for some reason it wasn’t added to the pitch. This wasn’t a problem though because we added enough information into the pitch to achieve a merit still but these sorts of mistakes will not happen again. My main concern overall though was not adding any information about what the video will be about. We all sat together and discussed the content of the video and it was my job to make the content, but it just didn’t add to the presentation.

All of the mistakes which we had in the presentation, we gathered that we did miss out a lot of information. Information that was really needed in the presentation as the client asked us a lot of questions which we didn’t answer for.

Overall we think that we could have done much better on the pitch. We believe that if we tried to promote the pitch again that we would be able to get a distinction and add all of the information we missed out into the presentation. We haven’t decided yet whether we are going to try and do the pitch again, but we are thinking about it. If we do, we will add all of the information we missed out into the presentation.